Name of photographer -
Nick Adams
Nick Adams
General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)-
photoj
photoj
List three problems that the judges note with the portfolio -
no story (just a blob of images), cut off parts of the photos, bad captions
no story (just a blob of images), cut off parts of the photos, bad captions
List two things the judges like-
art,
art,
What is your overall impression?
I don't understand what he was trying to do, his portfolio didn't have a story or anything.
I don't understand what he was trying to do, his portfolio didn't have a story or anything.
What did you like or not like?
How each of his photos didn't represent anything, I liked how he used the lighting, but his pictures were meaningless. They have no center of attention, on one of them he has a water bottle in a center of the shot, in another there's a girl in the background, another a guy playing a drum while a girl gets off a bus, and you can't see his head.
What did the judges note as strengths as they were critiquing it?
Originality
What do you see as strengths?How each of his photos didn't represent anything, I liked how he used the lighting, but his pictures were meaningless. They have no center of attention, on one of them he has a water bottle in a center of the shot, in another there's a girl in the background, another a guy playing a drum while a girl gets off a bus, and you can't see his head.
What did the judges note as strengths as they were critiquing it?
Originality
The art he uses in the photos
Do you see any weaknesses?
no story to the photos without relying on the captions read by the judges
Name of photographer -
Jordan Murph
General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)-
sports
List three problems that the judges note with the portfolio -
use of space on golpher & swimmer, comp. was lost near the end, an post card like with the sunspot with the football player
List two things the judges like-
well lit, use of comp.
What is your overall impression?
He's pretty good, but he doesn't have a consistency in the composition he uses.
What did you like or not like?
They like the lighting and the composition he uses when he does use it.
What did the judges note as strengths as they were critiquing it?
What did the judges note as strengths as they were critiquing it?
composition, and use of people
What do you see as strengths?
Comp & lighting
Do you see any weaknesses?
composition is lost inside, and a few action shots are weird
Do you see any weaknesses?
composition is lost inside, and a few action shots are weird
Name of photographer -
Daryl Parveto
General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)-
photoj
List three problems that the judges note with the portfolio -
worng captions, weak compositon, mixed pics/no correlation, captions too long
List two things the judges like-
nice light & split screen
What is your overall impression?
he was okay i just think the judges were a little rough on him becuase of his captions
What did you like or not like?
What did the judges note as strengths as they were critiquing it?
What did the judges note as strengths as they were critiquing it?
What do you see as strengths?
his compsiton, captures his story, magazine like pictures
Do you see any weaknesses?
Do you see any weaknesses?
photos don't correlate at first, but in the end they due w/ the water and the elderly
Name of photographer -
Carlos Delgado
General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)-
List three problems that the judges note with the portfolio -List two things the judges like-
What is your overall impression?
What did you like or not like?
What did the judges note as strengths as they were critiquing it?
What do you see as strengths?
Do you see any weaknesses?
Briefly describe the process the judges went through in deciding the winner.